okay I've been thinking and I'm going to start writing this novel again tomorrow or today I'm going to delete this chapter when I wake up at like 13:32 (1 pm) I might change the writing style I don't know, so tell me if you like the writing style I'm using for this novel at the moment if you don't ill change it to something like the;
"hi there Jim". spoke a man in his late 20s while pulling a shopping cart to the side. "hi Frank what are you doing here". said a man that looks to be in his early 30s. "oh I'm here to buy presents for my 5-year-old daughter it's her birthday tomorrow and the COVID-19 stuff is kinda making hard ya know". he said with a frown while leaning on the side where the food was. "no not really my daughter died 3 years ago". he man said with a tear in his eye. -the end-
(please tell)